外语教研培训中心 石燕
2006年3月
大学英语CET系列讲座之
作文篇
Welcome to My Lecture on CET Writing
6. 考试过程中要留意的细节
Contents
1. CET作文评分标准简介
2. 解读新样卷中的作文——如何调整,适应新形式
3. CET-4 近年作文题目一览和作文命题趋势分析
4. CET写作常见错误和应对策略
5. 平时如何提高写作技能
评分标准
1. 短文写作部分满分为15分.
2. 阅卷标准共分五等:14分,11分,8分,5分,及2分.
3. 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照参照卷评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定为该分数(即8分);若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数,则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分),但不得加或减半分.
给分档
14分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好.基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错.
11分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误.
8分 —— 基本切题.有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误.
5分 —— 基本切题.表达思想不清楚,连贯性差.有较多的严重语言错误.
2分 —— 条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误.
作文评分标准示例
请对照评分标准,研究一下2002年12月四级考试作文的评分标准示例,找出失分的原因,以避免在自己的作文中出现.(括号中为点评)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: It pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1. 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象.
2. 诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实.
It Pays to Be Honest
14 points
Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams.(第一句点明话题,同时用although引导的从句指出诚实是美德,为后文作了铺垫,再用例子阐释第一句提纲.)
Dishonest people are short-sighted. Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers won't buy their products any more. As a result, they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison. By contrast, honest people gain a lot. (从反面论述不诚实的坏处,得出结论) Those who always tell truth or keep to their promise not only let others trust them but gain respect from other people as well. Such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends. Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends with them, Besides, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job. Generally speaking, every employer wants his employees to be honest. So we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later. (从其它方面认述诚实的好处)

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